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古意＊春江花月夜

野航
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Posted: 2007-05-01 17:01:47 Post subject: 古意＊春江花月夜

春江花月夜今夜让我在膝上静静地摊开江水用月光银白的手指拔响波浪的弦今夜是永恒之夜今夜是虚无之夜花香和水汽像月光一样弥漫空中我，一个孤独的人子独对青天明月无声地抚摸着无边的江面像抚摸一匹皮毛光亮的马一匹万丈飘扬的绸缎今夜是呈现之夜今夜是告别之夜我，一个泥土捏就的人一切事物中最易朽者是父亲也是母亲是祖先也是后代怀抱着长江这把古老的琴坐在宇宙中轻轻地奏响了人的叹息 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-05-01 17:06:55 Post subject:

柔美的韵律,轻轻地奏响了人的叹息. 出手果然不凡. 欢迎你, 朋友.

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Posted: 2007-05-01 17:28:06 Post subject:

我，一个泥土捏就的人一切事物中最易朽者精辟，显示了实力欢迎野航 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2007-05-01 18:39:36 Post subject: 谢谢两位版主评赏！

也欢迎到我的个人主页作客！批评指导。 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-05-01 18:42:23 Post subject:

在网上查到白水咏荷诗，清丽非常，喜欢！ _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

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Posted: 2007-05-01 18:47:19 Post subject:

野航 wrote:

在网上查到白水咏荷诗，清丽非常，喜欢！

确实是这样的

白水
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Posted: 2007-05-13 04:47:36 Post subject:

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Posted: 2007-05-13 05:09:53 Post subject:

独对青天明月无声地抚摸着无边的江面像抚摸一匹皮毛光亮的马一匹万丈飘扬的绸缎很好的诗，欣赏了 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

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Posted: 2007-05-13 22:01:56 Post subject:

斯人独憔悴。问好野航，不料在这里遇到你。 _________________ 诗歌是本我，随笔是自我，小说是超我，我的libido是哲学，而我首先是一个人。谁在巴别塔尖：http://blog.sina.com.cn/babel

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Posted: 2007-05-14 09:47:25 Post subject:

老朋友来了，向野航问好：） _________________ 与文字同生,在诗歌中流浪...... http://blog.sina.com.cn/wulun

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Posted: 2007-05-14 12:55:36 Post subject:

好诗！月光美酒一般，令人沉醉！诗艺深厚，不同凡响。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

博弈
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Posted: 2007-05-14 18:42:55 Post subject:

同样地，你也该选些难度系数大的才会有再提升。这诗里的喻象，前人的诗里都有了。好诗。欢迎！ _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

野航
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Posted: 2007-06-10 12:23:51 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

同样地，你也该选些难度系数大的才会有再提升。
这诗里的喻象，前人的诗里都有了。
好诗。
欢迎！

批评得好！努力提高。
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江城子
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Posted: 2009-07-10 18:56:03 Post subject:

有种超越时空之美感 _________________ 江城子

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