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火车
李有明
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PostPosted: 2009-07-02 11:35:57    Post subject: 火车 Reply with quote

火车

带好母亲的废话和父亲的主张
我和一个与商品打交道的哥哥
靠在火车过道上

远离炕头的亲切 在跑动的景物中
我找到了温暖的张望
我在欣赏树木和山野的石头
他在打量商品的价格怎样上涨

异地的姑娘冲破我的想象
站在我的眼皮下勾引我的目光
时间被车厢内的灯拿起
一张张面具在夜风里摆放

一位老北京用吉他伴奏着夜风
一架商品车拉着列车员
纠正着坐姿 填饱着肚皮

一切在空气中拥挤
潮湿的晚景感动着眼睛
两个不会吃饭的人闹腾着碗和勺子
我们吃着昨天准备的粮食
谈着高级的审美问题

擦窗而过的山海关的牌子
还挂着孟姜女的心悸
那个将长城哭成大海的人
今天也从山东来这里
车厢外的声响 敲锣打鼓的秦始皇
喊着号子为世界末日加油

下一站是沈阳 听辽河水演讲
这是日本鬼子侵略过的地方
害死过他的亲娘
你瞧,那血洗的炮台 染色的墙

伯父就住在这两千里外
我用汗水写下两行脚步
如今随便说一句
血压就猛长 猛长
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2009-07-03 03:12:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

忙碌的火车。
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李有明
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PostPosted: 2009-07-03 04:24:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
忙碌的火车。
问好多批评!
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是有缘
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PostPosted: 2009-07-08 17:27:15    Post subject: Reply with quote

动了。
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苏茉儿
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PostPosted: 2009-07-14 09:46:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

嗯,有些历史不该忘记。问好!
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博弈
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PostPosted: 2009-07-24 15:00:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

朴素,动人文字中有思想。
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上城
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PostPosted: 2009-07-24 22:02:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

非常流畅
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PostPosted: 2009-07-25 08:03:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

是很 朴素,动人
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PostPosted: 2009-07-25 08:03:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

是很 朴素,动人
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