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◎北方以北 那些孤独的烂漫
老祥
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PostPosted: 2009-07-06 01:20:08    Post subject: ◎北方以北 那些孤独的烂漫 Reply with quote

到七月 那些明媚开始逆转
远方斑斓的月色 住着故乡
我的暖深深陷下去
温柔的软 把我的怒放吸干
北方以北
徜徉心扉高昂的支撑 情窦初开
记忆缓缓盛开 绽放嫣然
我蓄势已久
却不能拥抱


老房子 有着故事
自私的不能拆迁
塞满褶皱的墙壁 满是埃尘
父亲沉默 抽着烟
沧桑的皱纹 写满心事
父亲 请原谅我
原谅我偷走你的爱
让老去的岁月 无法散发
即使 溺水的芬芳



在昨天 那是多么经典的一场悲剧
孤独打湿我 打湿故乡
母亲面朝黄土 滚烫的汗滴融入干涩
父亲拎着锄头 那背影模糊多少记忆的酸楚
太阳继续激情 让绿闪光
油菜花烂漫 含蓄的香气异样格调
摘一朵 给母亲
母亲笑笑 继续劳作
那时我才懂 母亲的浪漫多么悲悯
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2009-07-18 14:20:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

立意挺好~写得有些散~

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