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红素手

林岳芳
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Posted: 2009-06-27 15:58:48 Post subject: 红素手

一双纤纤红素手在泉水里轻轻揉啊揉揉红了山茶花娇羞的脸揉来了百灵鸟清脆的歌你是大山的女儿哟深深藏在山水的尽头春花的烂漫是你最真的追求丰硕的果实在你幸福的枝头你是哥哥的宝贝哟静静躺在哥哥的心头甜蜜的爱情是你缠绵的理由不变的相思是你一生的守侯你的一双红素手在天地之间唱着快乐的歌灵动的山泉是永恒的旋律灿烂的山花是无悔的情歌 _________________ 诗情画意的江南，养育了一个爱诗歌的女人。于是，在几度夕阳里，我亦歌亦吟，在江南阡陌上，姗姗而来......

李有明
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Posted: 2009-06-27 21:12:53 Post subject:

写的比较舒展抒情，学习！

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-06-27 23:39:34 Post subject:

抒情的~

魏鵬展
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Joined: 14 Apr 2009
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Location: Hong Kong 香港
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Posted: 2009-06-27 23:52:39 Post subject:

形式很整齊，節湊不錯﹗ _________________ 香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄： http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html 魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

林岳芳
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Posted: 2009-06-28 02:56:15 Post subject:

李有明 wrote:

写的比较舒展抒情，学习！

谢谢朋友关注!
祝创作愉快~
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诗情画意的江南，养育了一个爱诗歌的女人。于是，在几度夕阳里，我亦歌亦吟，在江南阡陌上，姗姗而来......

林岳芳
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Posted: 2009-06-28 02:57:23 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

抒情的~

谢谢半溪明月老师!
祝您快乐~
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诗情画意的江南，养育了一个爱诗歌的女人。于是，在几度夕阳里，我亦歌亦吟，在江南阡陌上，姗姗而来......

林岳芳
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林岳芳Collection

Posted: 2009-06-28 02:59:01 Post subject:

魏鵬展 wrote:

形式很整齊，節湊不錯﹗

谢谢魏鵬展老师关注!
祝您愉快~
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诗情画意的江南，养育了一个爱诗歌的女人。于是，在几度夕阳里，我亦歌亦吟，在江南阡陌上，姗姗而来......

上城
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Posted: 2009-06-29 09:49:59 Post subject:

婉约柔美到江南，江南确乎如此 _________________ 每个诗人都很重要

林岳芳
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Posted: 2009-06-29 12:43:53 Post subject:

上城 wrote:

婉约柔美到江南，江南确乎如此

谢谢朋友关注!
欢迎您来江南~
问好!
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诗情画意的江南，养育了一个爱诗歌的女人。于是，在几度夕阳里，我亦歌亦吟，在江南阡陌上，姗姗而来......

雨中垂钓人
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Posted: 2009-09-06 01:56:03 Post subject:

太好了，谱曲是一首好的歌子。

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