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國度。行旅

博弈
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Posted: 2009-06-23 19:55:41 Post subject: 國度。行旅

國度。行旅我的詩是一條鯨魚自赤道游向北極沒有領海也沒有領土我的眼睛是流星我的地球一顆水晶沒有地圖的邊界線我的心是一隻海鷗飛翔在天空── 從不占有天空夜晚我在曠野所有的屋子努力把燈光拘藏我卻聽到逃出來的蟋蟀如是我呼吸地我要來去來去我的國度 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-06-24 03:40:53 Post subject:

很抒情啊。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-06-24 13:42:09 Post subject:

飛翔在天空── 從不占有天空 ....喜欢这句.

sfiawong
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Posted: 2009-06-25 03:47:26 Post subject:

詩人對事物的公平一切都在自由, 國度無分界線我卻聽到逃出來的蟋蟀.. 給我無限的的想像! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-06-25 19:23:11 Post subject:

回旋而旷远，超抒情耶

博弈
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Posted: 2009-06-27 06:20:58 Post subject:

......或许该加一个‘回而不提’的回帖选择功能，为回帖保留小读众。问好诸位(不问以为无礼, 问了帖子上浮;无意上提)。 _________________ （在不斷的審醜裡終將建立起新的審美）

nobody
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Posted: 2009-06-27 06:30:36 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

......或许该加一个‘回而不提’的回帖选择功能，
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这个说到我心里去了。经常有同感，呵呵
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白水
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Posted: 2009-06-27 07:31:54 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

......或许该加一个‘回而不提’的回帖选择功能，
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虚伪

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博弈
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Posted: 2009-06-27 08:21:11 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

虚伪

开溜

这个说到我心里去了。经常有同感，呵呵...
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上城
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Posted: 2009-06-27 14:56:04 Post subject:

_________________ 每个诗人都很重要

安红红
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Posted: 2009-06-28 00:04:51 Post subject:

有意境~问好~ 结尾的两句有些拗口~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

魏鵬展
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Posted: 2009-06-28 00:10:02 Post subject:

文字較明快，行行有意象。 _________________ 香港文學報《小說與詩》投稿方法+稿約、稿例、最新一期目錄： http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_60b7bcff01018dcp.html 魏鵬展是香港詩人、《小說與詩》主編、中文教師；微信(WeChat): npcjeffrey

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-06-28 00:40:58 Post subject:

夜晚我在曠野所有的屋子努力把燈光拘藏我卻聽到逃出來的蟋蟀

上城
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Posted: 2009-06-29 09:41:33 Post subject:

博弈 wrote:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

虚伪

开溜

这个说到我心里去了。经常有同感，呵呵...

Mr Mark 的提议真的很好。这会使网站更显得人性化

首先我们一打开“首页”，在“浏览过的帖子里”会看到最新的回复，这个很好。想看下，回复下很方便。发送时有个选择又很好，有时不想让自己浮上来就很容易。再着可以把版面留给很多新来的朋友，避免自己冲屏。喜欢隐居，比如像“上城”

技术上可有点难度，代码该怎么实现？
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