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稻花儿香

秦海
童生

Joined: 02 May 2009
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Posted: 2009-06-25 01:29:15 Post subject: 稻花儿香

稻花儿香秦海六月藏掖在禾苗的腋下是一簇簇才露头的谷穗淡黄色的花香只有夏天才能闻到一只牛犊从母牛的唤声里跑出稻花儿香儿唤娘

赵福治
探花

Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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Posted: 2009-06-25 04:10:30 Post subject:

六月藏掖在禾苗的腋下是一簇簇才露头的谷穗淡黄色的花香只有夏天才能闻到 ...简短有味.

sfiawong
秀才

Joined: 05 May 2009
Posts: 813
Location: US/HK
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Posted: 2009-06-25 13:10:58 Post subject:

秦海 wrote:

稻花儿香
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秦海君,你好,只寫出自己的感覺,似是未到癢處,寫詩要求與人共嗚,盡你所知所想,並和讀者分享,及讓人多些想像,你本人感覺未必是別人的一樣,不能共鳴矣!
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