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天下宜春 (组诗)
秦海
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PostPosted: 2009-06-23 21:39:28    Post subject: 天下宜春 (组诗) Reply with quote

天下宜春 (组诗)

秦海

1. 一扇孤独的门

一扇门孤独 多少年
就这么沉默不语
在天工开物园 我看到
那扇门 孤独成了夕阳的橙色

岁月是大路
正通往孤独的门
奉新县 宋埠镇 牌楼村
石门里 明代的一个孤独老人
风月也会恣情
总爱把孤独搬来搬去

一扇门的孤独 没有
泡温汤 或者
示爱的眼神那么直接

现在 宋应星站在门的那边
看到一群人
又在翻动他的孤独

2. 下明月山

下明月山
行走在刀刃上
时间嗑开许多豁口
身子在崖壁上陡峭
喘息成了一种意象

远处漂来了一处村庄
一个男孩
一声不响
赶着成群的牛羊

提起身边的小姑娘
泪水打湿了一片月光

3. 泡温汤

泡温汤 留下一池春色
几只燕子从唐朝飞回
张合的泉眼
更加混沌 孤独

美人是泡出来的
美人的身子
泡在温汤的腰身里
比温汤还软
比温汤还嫩

在36度的春天里
路过的白衣少年是谁
泡温汤 泡不下的阳春三月
早己是鸟语花香

4. 天下宜春

明月山缆车上升的高度
早己不是春的高度
春天嫁接在采茶戏里
让远方的爱人
听出了一点微凉
剌史韩愈的诗句
与我的车擦肩而过
莫以宜春远
江山多胜游
先生的吟唱渐行渐远

迎面的洪州窑
烧制的是春天
陶渊明结庐耕田
种的是春天
宋应星在天工开物里忙碌
经营的是春天

春天在宜春
来到宜春就怀抱春天
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2009-06-24 03:34:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

在36度的春天里
——这一句可以再推敲一下。
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 03:05:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

觉得不错的。努力做
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sfiawong
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Joined: 05 May 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-06-25 12:57:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

杯中冲浪 wrote:
在36度的春天里
——这一句可以再推敲一下。

對,春天應是最優良,何有高溫36度反常?
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