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七绝．漫兴

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一字通
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Posted: 2009-12-27 10:21:23 Post subject: 七绝．漫兴

屏前随性自喃喃，韵海行舟懒挂帆。若遇江州司马活，新风无意湿青衫。 _________________ 网络相逢缘分在，笑谈今古学诗人。

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Posted: 2009-12-28 09:23:55 Post subject:

一字通 wrote:

屏前随性自喃喃，韵海行舟懒挂帆。
若遇江州司马活，新风无意湿青衫。

高手！！！学习，致意！

一字通
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Posted: 2009-12-28 09:48:40 Post subject:

秋来夏去白云高，犹望苍山若比高。俯首悠悠湖水里，云峰不及碧波高。 ---问候先生！还请多指教！ _________________ 网络相逢缘分在，笑谈今古学诗人。

李盈枝
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Posted: 2009-12-28 14:27:43 Post subject:

一字通 wrote:

秋来夏去白云高，犹望苍山若比高。
俯首悠悠湖水里，云峰不及碧波高。
---问候先生！还请多指教！

问好！有意思！福唐独木桥体在词中多见，故见先生用于近体诗，感觉很新鲜。大作气韵流畅，意境很美，欣赏学习！

一字通
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Posted: 2009-12-29 01:24:04 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

一字通 wrote:

秋来夏去白云高，犹望苍山若比高。
俯首悠悠湖水里，云峰不及碧波高。
---问候先生！还请多指教！

问好！有意思！福唐独木桥体在词中多见，故见先生用于近体诗，感觉很新鲜。大作气韵流畅，意境很美，欣赏学习！

问好先生！感谢光临！在下纯属旁门左道，让先生见笑了！
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Posted: 2009-12-29 07:37:14 Post subject:

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Posted: 2009-12-29 14:24:26 Post subject:

江州司马琵琶怨，沦落天涯直到今。

连南河
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Posted: 2009-12-29 20:13:57 Post subject:

江州司马琵琶曲,韵海行舟又挂帆. '古韵寻芳步,天涯觅旧知' _________________ 一路雨丝一路风

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Posted: 2009-12-30 03:44:59 Post subject:

握手庆红情见真，掌声更觉满屏春。与君愿做倾杯友，共赋新词胜古人。 --问好qinghongh斑斑！ _________________ 网络相逢缘分在，笑谈今古学诗人。

一字通
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Posted: 2009-12-30 13:08:14 Post subject:

连南河 wrote:

江州司马琵琶曲,韵海行舟又挂帆.

'古韵寻芳步,天涯觅旧知'

同行枫叶国，共爱月光诗。
---问好君！
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qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-12-30 13:20:20 Post subject:

一字通 wrote:

握手庆红情见真，掌声更觉满屏春。
与君愿做倾杯友，共赋新词胜古人。
--问好qinghongh斑斑！

诗友知我旧名，莫非旧友？

李盈枝
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Posted: 2009-12-30 18:15:50 Post subject:

一字通 wrote:

握手庆红情见真，掌声更觉满屏春。
与君愿做倾杯友，共赋新词胜古人。
--问好qinghongh斑斑！

一字通时百感真，或忧或喜酿为春。
旁门左道多真趣，不做装猫变狗人。

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Posted: 2009-12-30 18:26:50 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

一字通 wrote:

秋来夏去白云高，犹望苍山若比高。
俯首悠悠湖水里，云峰不及碧波高。
---问候先生！还请多指教！

问好！有意思！福唐独木桥体在词中多见，故见先生用于近体诗，感觉很新鲜。大作气韵流畅，意境很美，欣赏学习！

云峰不及碧波高，若比碧波君更高。
高格常于真率出，出神入化羡才高。

一字通
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Posted: 2009-12-31 07:44:37 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

一字通 wrote:

握手庆红情见真，掌声更觉满屏春。
与君愿做倾杯友，共赋新词胜古人。
--问好qinghongh斑斑！

诗友知我旧名，莫非旧友？

旧体诗之友，当可简称旧友！~~~~问好兄！
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一字通
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Posted: 2009-12-31 07:49:13 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

一字通 wrote:

握手庆红情见真，掌声更觉满屏春。
与君愿做倾杯友，共赋新词胜古人。
--问好qinghongh斑斑！

一字通时百感真，或忧或喜酿为春。
旁门左道多真趣，不做装猫变狗人。

世间母爱最为真，娘的慈颜更胜春。
漂泊他乡常记取，一生要做善良人。
---问好先生！
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一字通
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Posted: 2009-12-31 07:55:25 Post subject:

李盈枝 wrote:

一字通 wrote:

秋来夏去白云高，犹望苍山若比高。
俯首悠悠湖水里，云峰不及碧波高。
---问候先生！还请多指教！

问好！有意思！福唐独木桥体在词中多见，故见先生用于近体诗，感觉很新鲜。大作气韵流畅，意境很美，欣赏学习！

云峰不及碧波高，若比碧波君更高。
高格常于真率出，出神入化羡才高。

作诗不要比才高，读者共鸣当是高。
据典引经空显摆，意深言浅乃真高。

---问好先生！见笑了！敬祝新年快乐！
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白水
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Posted: 2009-12-31 08:02:58 Post subject:

意深言浅乃真高。新年快乐

李盈枝
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Posted: 2009-12-31 08:17:41 Post subject:

据典引经空显摆谬矣！不掉书袋，如何能唬住胆小的？！

冰清
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Posted: 2009-12-31 18:21:01 Post subject:

一字通 wrote:

屏前随性自喃喃，韵海行舟懒挂帆。
若遇江州司马活，新风无意湿青衫。

作诗不要比才高，读者共鸣当是高。
据典引经空显摆，意深言浅乃真高

看似率意随性，实为真知灼见!
问好新年！

一字通
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Posted: 2010-01-01 01:19:51 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

意深言浅乃真高。

新年快乐

白水兄新年快乐！
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