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是的，母亲

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Posted: 2007-02-09 10:20:11 Post subject: 是的，母亲

是的，母亲深，是时间，经历，还是血浓于水深，是无情还是有情还是憎恨，别问我。夜过午，这时刻，我的心除了颤抖还是颤抖母亲，你是善良的，从来只增加对你的爱。把你生前死后的过程交给咀嚼，我的情感如草原的骏马狂奔，除了一阵阵惊悸还是一阵阵惊悸我不敢叫你喊你，你的目光仍柔柔我不敢叫你喊你，你的心脏充满暖流你的心灵不平衡了，我仍然见到平衡没有半点偏差，啊爱是的，我有灾难，我有疾病，你不弃是的，他有疾病，他有灾难，你不弃只是我能把灾难一一变成幸福和强大动力，而我的弟弟羸弱，骨瘦如柴我痛哭，我悲伤，但我像你一样悲悯是的，钱不能让我增加憎恨仇怨和恶毒财产算得了什么，土地算得了什么，你的目光柔柔，亲爱到永远，尽管我不止一次暗自泪流 _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱

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Posted: 2007-02-09 10:22:56 Post subject: Re: 是的，母亲

风动松柏 wrote:

是的，母亲

深，是时间，经历，还是血浓于水
深，是无情还是有情还是憎恨，别问
我。夜过午，这时刻，我的心除了
颤抖还是颤抖

母亲，你是善良的，从来只增加对你
的爱。把你生前死后的过程交给咀嚼，我
的情感如草原的骏马狂奔，除了一阵阵惊悸
还是一阵阵惊悸

我不敢叫你喊你，你的目光仍柔柔
我不敢叫你喊你，你的心脏充满暖流
你的心灵不平衡了，我仍然见到平衡
没有半点偏差，啊爱

是的，我有灾难，我有疾病，你不弃
是的，他有疾病，有灾难，你也不弃
只是我能把灾难一一变成幸福和强大
动力，而我的弟弟羸弱，骨瘦如柴

我痛哭，我悲伤，但我像你一样悲悯
是的，钱不能让我增加憎恨仇怨和恶毒
财产算得了什么，土地算得了什么，你
的目光柔柔，亲爱到永远，尽管我不止
一次暗自泪流

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Posted: 2007-02-09 10:23:18 Post subject:

母爱无声,眼中有泪! 致敬! _________________ 木容暮又寸博客

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Posted: 2007-02-09 11:05:04 Post subject:

非常好。断句有点不习惯。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-02-09 14:46:11 Post subject:

谢谢 _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱

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Posted: 2007-02-09 14:55:00 Post subject:

木容暮又寸 wrote:

母爱无声,眼中有泪!
致敬!

谢谢欣赏.
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Posted: 2007-02-09 14:56:08 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

非常好。
断句有点不习惯。

谢谢你的评阅.
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Posted: 2007-02-09 14:56:40 Post subject:

谢谢 _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱

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Posted: 2007-02-09 23:34:51 Post subject:

木容暮又寸 wrote:

母爱无声,眼中有泪!
致敬!

再一次谢谢问好.
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Posted: 2007-02-11 01:08:14 Post subject:

经过自我比较,我也觉得这诗好. _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱

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Posted: 2007-02-11 03:38:43 Post subject:

感动于你的真情,问好.

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Posted: 2007-02-12 07:47:51 Post subject:

谢谢三兄欣赏. _________________ 我爱是因为有所不爱

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