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幻与真(新诗)
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 21:57:49    Post subject: 幻与真(新诗) Reply with quote

幻与真



在千里之外

她存在
她不存在


她迎我
娇媚如昔

在巨岩边
在清泉旁
随风摇曳


她存在
在千里之外
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 23:28:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

让我思索一下~
先问好:)
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PostPosted: 2009-06-10 05:19:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

少人评论,晦涩的诗都不太受欢迎.

请顺道来慈林的博客溜溜,慈林的博客己入选新浪名博.
http://blog.sina.com.cn/markschen(更多、更好......尤其情诗写得最好.)
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PostPosted: 2009-06-10 12:35:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

似是夢中花,撲朔迷離!
問好!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-21 18:12:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

慈林 wrote:
幻与真
...

君 仍能保留幻想的力量,

恭喜你有這份思維的寶藏.

它就是寫詩的好處...欣賞了.
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