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自描
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PostPosted: 2007-02-02 21:10:24    Post subject: 自描 Reply with quote

自描
一只长满青苔的小舟
行进迟缓
却挂一腔欲达彼岸的梦
于船头

此岸春天的鸟语花香
渐行渐远
尚在乘风逗我
回头寻找
无影无踪
惟有无情无色的风
推我搡我

细数轻盈的阳光
在我用尽之前
渴望地平线显现
并有一颗树的轮廓
可系业已疲惫的小舟
2006-8-9 凌晨
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PostPosted: 2007-02-03 00:57:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

表达很到位。有梦就好,尽管要爬山涉水。问好:)
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PostPosted: 2007-02-03 07:54:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

并有一颗树的轮廓

很好的质朴
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-02-04 17:34:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

细数轻盈的阳光
在我用尽之前
渴望地平线显现
并有一颗树的轮廓
可系业已疲惫的小舟
——闲笔之中存古韵,特欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2007-02-07 01:23:32    Post subject: 谢谢 Reply with quote

问好各位朋友/老师.多批评.
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