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投六月流年花蝶泪（组诗）

老祥
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Posted: 2009-06-18 21:53:09 Post subject: 投六月流年花蝶泪（组诗）

◎绿最后往事浮沉介入宿命的热深陷华年的棱角黑肌肤揣测孤独伴随疼痛的绽放抵达心跳支撑春色茫然辗转流离失所六月我的绿从未绽放夏天的盎然依然麻木我需要尝试推开理想靠近现实与初衷浪漫刻薄夜不黑成熟的脸庞沾满璀璨的薄荷深呼吸那些寂寞千钧一发 ◎现实生活天空的雨洒下来渗透大地的吻日子遗忘的麻雀被唤醒它们仓促的翱翔回到温暖编成的窝不告诉我什么才是生活？明媚最终折射寂寞的枝头豁然开朗它们欢愉歌唱然而不久却一声轰鸣伐木者完全了它们的支离我望着无奈的鸟儿深陷沉默

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Posted: 2009-06-19 19:12:40 Post subject:

◎现实生活天空的雨洒下来渗透大地的吻日子遗忘的麻雀被唤醒它们仓促的翱翔回到温暖编成的窝不告诉我什么才是生活？明媚最终折射寂寞的枝头豁然开朗它们欢愉歌唱然而不久却一声轰鸣伐木者完全了它们的支离我望着无奈的鸟儿深陷沉默....... 美好的晨光，残酷的现实........

老祥
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Posted: 2009-06-19 19:41:00 Post subject:

现实既是如此问好

杨海军
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Posted: 2009-06-19 22:42:27 Post subject:

明媚最终折射寂寞的枝头豁然开朗它们欢愉歌唱然而不久却一声轰鸣伐木者完全了它们的支离我望着无奈的鸟儿深陷沉默 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

何君华
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Posted: 2009-06-20 01:24:13 Post subject:

欣赏！好久没来了~~ _________________ 何君华

老祥
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Posted: 2009-06-20 01:58:02 Post subject:

何君华 wrote:

欣赏！好久没来了~~

问好

李有明
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Posted: 2009-06-20 02:49:47 Post subject:

还是有些突兀，读起来不太舒服！

老祥
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Posted: 2009-06-20 15:07:01 Post subject:

李有明 wrote:

还是有些突兀，读起来不太舒服！

欣然接受诗歌是永恒的进步也是永恒的谢谢老师的教诲

老祥
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Posted: 2009-06-21 20:31:23 Post subject:

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