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等你老了1，2，3。（这个可以投一下试试）

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Posted: 2009-06-15 15:58:46 Post subject: 等你老了1，2，3。（这个可以投一下试试）

当你老了1 撕一片松翠梅香的冬天连同雪花乱坠的家园当你老了做件长衫当你老了2 当你老了象一件年久的衣服满是烫不平的褶皱袖口也破了领子也飞了还缺了几枚纽扣那就换一件挑你喜欢的牌子如果你象往常一样非要给我也买一件那我们就一起换当你老了3 当你老了我也老了就象两个狗不理包子皮薄馅大十八个褶 2009-6-16 2009-6-16 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

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Posted: 2009-06-15 16:04:24 Post subject:

这首59 分开个玩笑。很有新意的一首。

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Posted: 2009-06-15 18:02:10 Post subject:

白水先生好，谢谢光临。大小玩笑随便开，长刀短刀随便扎 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

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Posted: 2009-06-15 22:02:08 Post subject:

有新意的一首，欣赏问好！

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Posted: 2009-06-16 03:29:37 Post subject:

喜欢“当你老了1 ”唯美 _________________ 用想象插进诗歌的心脏！

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Posted: 2009-06-16 15:28:03 Post subject:

东江湖主 wrote:

有新意的一首，欣赏问好！

问好湖主!谢来读！
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Posted: 2009-06-16 15:30:14 Post subject:

地依树 wrote:

喜欢“当你老了1 ”唯美

问好树，谢来读。祝您树大招风，荫满天下。 Laughing

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Posted: 2009-06-18 00:51:10 Post subject:

这个可以投一下试试。 _________________ 是金子也会花光地

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Posted: 2009-06-18 02:49:33 Post subject:

生活的真！问候刘浪！

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Posted: 2009-06-18 15:43:38 Post subject:

桃花好，这里看到你真高兴桃花吉祥！扎西德勒！ _________________ 是金子也会花光地

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Posted: 2009-06-18 16:33:25 Post subject:

刘浪 wrote:

这个可以投一下试试。 Laughing

要80 分以上的

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Posted: 2009-06-20 02:55:50 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

刘浪 wrote:

这个可以投一下试试。 Laughing

要80 分以上的

噢！还差20多分捏！
先生，我体育很好，算那种特长生，给不给加分啊！？ Laughing

俺继续努力。。。。。。。。问候白水！
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