黄洋界
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 Posted: 2009-06-26 16:31:17 Post subject: 咏物四题 |
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咏物四题
伞
遮阳蔽雨为君开 贵贱何分效力来
讨厌官家懒举手 却将下属当奴才
床
人生半世结尘缘 夜夜清宵伴我眠
金屋千间何足贵 寄身六尺好偷闲
枕
困顿归来夜色沉 倒头倚汝梦魂深
惺松睡眼朝暾起 不觉西窗鸟弄音
鞋
风霜雨雪不胜嗟 涉水爬山夕阳斜
不弃不离长相守 任劳任怨走天涯
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qinghongh
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| Posted: 2009-06-26 17:19:10 Post subject: |
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| 黄老师善写咏物诗。“讨厌官家懒举手 却将下属当奴才”直指“官文化”，中国不少人官不大，架子大，也是另一种奴才意识。人应该是平等的。 |
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莹雪
进士出身
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| Posted: 2009-06-26 17:24:17 Post subject: |
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| 各有各的不同，各有各的深意。问好！ |
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野航
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Location: toronto
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| Posted: 2009-06-27 15:41:59 Post subject: |
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黄老这几首都好,情理味俱备.
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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米运刚
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Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-06-27 16:02:11 Post subject: |
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| 寄情于物，寓理于物。谢谢黄先生好诗！ |
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2009-06-27 17:07:46 Post subject: |
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谢庆宏,莹雪,野航,运刚各位赏评,并祝暑安!
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晓松
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| Posted: 2009-06-30 16:09:14 Post subject: |
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| 伞有爱憎，床结尘缘，枕伴汝梦，鞋走天涯。既贴切，又出新意。好！ |
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黄洋界
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
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| Posted: 2009-06-30 20:35:06 Post subject: |
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谢晓松雅评,问好!
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白云闲人
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| Posted: 2009-07-01 05:35:56 Post subject: |
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黄兄咏物寄情浓,抒怀寓理吟诗中!
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2009-07-01 16:41:30 Post subject: |
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谢白云兄评阅,问好!
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君山楚女
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Joined: 09 Sep 2008
Posts: 333
Location: 湖南雁城［居住南京］
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| Posted: 2009-07-03 23:16:44 Post subject: |
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黄先生咏物诗贴切出新意，值得学习。
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黄洋界
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| Posted: 2009-07-04 04:16:12 Post subject: |
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谢君山楚女评阅.问好新朋友!
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