子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
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Posted: 2009-03-01 15:43:51 Post subject: 【边缘】 |
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【边缘】
听到了自己的呼吸
带着昨晚的风
同样穿过鼻孔一样的街道
心跳
如昨晚的脚步
一深一浅散乱在南头
此刻我唯一肯定的就是
自己还活着
阳光还是那么美好
像昨晚的彩虹照在天楼的醉景
朦胧的绚丽的
我怕了
每次都得勒紧身体
憋紧气饮下大量液体状的白色火焰
每次......
每次......
每次它都把我推向火焰的浪潮中
要死要活
纵有久折不断的铁身子
生死的弄潮儿
难道白色的火焰
能烧死孤独的爱情 |
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半溪明月 榜眼

Joined: 30 Sep 2006 Posts: 4760
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Posted: 2009-03-01 15:52:58 Post subject: |
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难道白色的火焰
能烧死孤独的爱情
激烈的感情~问好子花~ |
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娇娇 秀才
Joined: 18 Nov 2008 Posts: 124 Location: 吉林四平 娇娇Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-03 03:06:36 Post subject: |
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子花也来了!问好!欣赏! _________________ 每段路都有蹊径,向着阳光延伸! |
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子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
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Posted: 2009-03-04 01:52:37 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢明月,娇阳两位美女诗人!! |
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若尘 童生
Joined: 01 Dec 2008 Posts: 29 Location: 中国 若尘Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-04 20:06:58 Post subject: |
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拜读,问好子花。 _________________ 走自己的路,让别人去说吧! |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-05 04:32:29 Post subject: |
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听到了自己的呼吸
带着昨晚的风
同样穿过鼻孔一样的街道  |
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子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
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Posted: 2009-03-05 16:21:08 Post subject: |
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| 若尘和白水两位诗人久不见近来可好!!?问候!! |
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韩少君 进士出身

Joined: 06 Apr 2007 Posts: 2558 Location: 吉林四平 韩少君Collection |
Posted: 2009-03-05 19:05:41 Post subject: |
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弄潮儿在潮头立
浪打红旗旗不湿 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345 |
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子花 秀才
Joined: 08 Mar 2007 Posts: 722
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Posted: 2009-06-17 00:56:07 Post subject: |
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| 韩少君 wrote: |
弄潮儿在潮头立
浪打红旗旗不湿 |
问候少君诗人! |
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