刘海
童生
Joined: 31 May 2009
Posts: 37
Location: 安徽六安
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 Posted: 2009-06-14 17:49:17 Post subject: 投稿诗一首《 咏荷叶》，请批。 |
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《 咏荷叶》
碧荷楚楚水中栽，阵阵清香扑面来。
月下风摇蛙醉看，风姿胜过百花开。 |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-06-14 20:42:57 Post subject: |
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可用刘兄“清风扑面”一词评兄之大作。试和几句，博兄一笑：
凌波绰约玉人栽，
宴罢盈盈渡江来。
一点灵心扶残醉，
幽幽带泪晚云开。 |
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李有明
秀才
Joined: 15 Jan 2008
Posts: 310
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| Posted: 2009-06-14 21:19:30 Post subject: |
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| 问好写的很美，学习！ |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-06-15 09:27:34 Post subject: |
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唱和俱佳!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-06-15 11:33:34 Post subject: |
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| 唱和俱佳咏荷诗。 |
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