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孤魂
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PostPosted: 2009-06-10 19:29:50    Post subject: 孤魂 Reply with quote

孤魂

我是一个无主詩魂
连一粒尘也不如
坐在一片白云上
由东方漂浮到西方

希望带给西方喜听的消息
忽然兴幸来到北美枫岛
遇见了蓝桥教我以庄子
司马策风授我以轻功

两者都是写诗的好风尚
希望学到一招半式
可以随意飞翔带给人们
新的希望

希望替人訢说痛苦
替人报导喜讯
北島,穆旦,和海子
我可否学到你们的皮毛

学到你们的精神
把哪种精神维持下去
我虽然不是出生於内地
但我有香港式的精神

香港人永远的爱国
永远的支持中国大地
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-06-11 06:17:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

sfiawong是香港人啊~祝诗艺精进!
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-06-11 18:14:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

你不是一个无主孤魂

北美枫有这么多朋友呢 Wink
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sfiawong
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PostPosted: 2009-06-12 17:04:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
你不是一个无主孤魂

北美枫有这么多朋友呢 Wink

我有北美楓的朋友,應不可稱孤魂

應改為幽魂較佳吧..?以前寫過稱'詩魂',不如用做名就合理吧!
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