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兄弟日复活的语言
董喜阳
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PostPosted: 2009-05-25 01:53:36    Post subject: 兄弟日复活的语言 Reply with quote

兄弟日复活的语言
——喜庆“棱角诗社”创立并写给所有“棱角诗社”的兄弟姐妹们
文/董喜阳(棱角诗社社长)

也许是呼唤,也许是蒙昭,也许是朝圣
或文字或笑脸或真情
或不知是谁精心安排好的,还不十分确定的某种相遇
抑或是某种邂逅
或是和陌生人某种意外的错过
或是别的一些什么
一个淹死在文字里的灵魂和另一个溺死在文字里的灵魂
紧紧相拥。那是一些数不清的复活灵魂
注入到了一个身体里
而这些差不多就构成了一首简单,却无尽的赞歌
尽管向缪斯家园的抵达中
被一片落叶击伤,被一声嚎叫惊吓的战栗
虽然经常低着头,摸着墙走路
虽然我们的鼻子碍于墙的挤压而被迫扁平
虽然狡猾的空气爆发出几声阴冷的干笑
但我们
也仍坚强的抬起头。看那
西天绽放的曙光一眼
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遛达的七七
秀才


Joined: 07 Jun 2006
Posts: 329

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PostPosted: 2009-05-25 14:09:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有骨的诗歌!

其中转折词似可减少些。

问好哥们儿,祝你们棱角诗社风生水起,源远流长 Smile
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sfiawong
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Joined: 05 May 2009
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Location: US/HK
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PostPosted: 2009-05-26 04:22:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

七小姐 wrote:
很有骨的诗歌!
...

可能是甚高尚的文藝,
不一定講金講銀...
完全是為了革命
接續了五四的精神!
繼承胡適和徐志摩的願望.
預祝你們的成功鼓浪前進.
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有評必回應.
Love your relatives and friends when they are near you.
我的英文詩:
http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong
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