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【玲珑四犯】 平庸
犀利
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PostPosted: 2009-05-21 15:45:15    Post subject: 【玲珑四犯】 平庸 Reply with quote

【玲珑四犯】 平庸


寡陋平庸
平庸寡陋
谁言此生如就
弄些酸腐字
日久无人嗅
休提少年时候
去峰峦
舞风凭袖
逝水年华
遣谁追取
心老英雄瘦

人间白云苍狗
叹芸芸万众
问君知否
似花般岁月
一去全乌有
穷通聚散终无数
忍从寂寞风光后
还沽酒
拈花坐瞰山河秀


【玲珑四犯】词牌名。此调创自宋周邦彦。双调,九十九字,仄韵。姜夔又有自度曲,与周词读句不同。此为姜夔自度曲。


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仄平平仄(韵)。
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平仄平平仄(韵)。

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平平仄(韵),
平平仄仄平平仄(韵)。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-21 17:41:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

不俗。提!
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PostPosted: 2009-05-22 04:37:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

"穷通聚散终无数,拈花坐瞰山河秀". 面对人生持拈花微笑心境,好!
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笛里关山.
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PostPosted: 2009-06-07 19:15:52    Post subject: Reply with quote

晓松 wrote:
不俗。提!



晓松雅赏!
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PostPosted: 2009-06-09 18:14:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢闲人垂赏!
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