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心情日记《悄悄话》添加中

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-05-17 03:43:22 Post subject: 心情日记《悄悄话》添加中

悄悄话儿（一）你给我发来悄悄话：我想给门前的柳娘变一下发型端庄的好还是飘逸的好波浪的好还是直板的好你喜欢火红色还是金黄色你认为好看的才好看你认为她好看她才真好看我答非所问：我喜欢甜心儿的脆皮儿的我在外地但没在别处悄悄话儿（二）我愿意广交朋友广交田园和那些俊虫美鸟我不稀罕衙门地铁超市包括文化局教育局卫生局我无暇顾及它（他、她）们我已被你贴上了私家标签例如我想把玉米的衣服脱下来看看他整个夏天藏了多少阳光也想给一棵水灵的葱脱去衣裳只是怕她在你面前十分害羞我只留下了我自己赤裸在灿烂的蓝天下直到你偶尔路过惊叫一声：呀---- 三总之，你是一块甜品巧克力或夹心饼他小心翼翼地剥开锡纸穷孩子一样用舌尖沾一点再沾一点那孩子眼巴巴地看着你就像巧克力在阳光下他吃到的远远没有融化的多四可你答应我了你带金银铜铁四种嫁妆足金的心跳银月的胳膊彩铜的枕头老铁的屏风如果你丢了嫁妆那也不用怕我还有一段彩绸系在你和蜻蜓的腰上 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

白水
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Posted: 2009-05-17 05:24:10 Post subject:

偷听

悬壶
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Posted: 2009-05-17 16:03:45 Post subject:

拟人得妙，感觉它们应该是他们 _________________ 倒悬壶子的人

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-05-18 22:18:02 Post subject:

_________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

姜慕水
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Posted: 2009-05-19 12:00:19 Post subject:

学习少君兄好诗,语言风趣幽默洒脱

杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2009-05-20 02:08:15 Post subject:

自如的很。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

sfiawong
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Posted: 2009-05-20 22:57:55 Post subject:

悄悄地對你...說聲真可愛! _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-05-21 13:44:03 Post subject: 姜慕水

谢：姜慕水杯中冲浪 sfiawong sfiawong你好。博客打开了。可惜我不懂英文。 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

骨笛
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Posted: 2009-05-21 15:13:19 Post subject:

情丝并蒂。。。。。。。。。。。 _________________ 我把天空装在我家里，鸟儿天空中飞来飞去

遛达的七七
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Posted: 2009-05-22 11:22:07 Post subject:

总之你是一块甜品

安红红
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Posted: 2009-05-22 15:05:53 Post subject:

软乎乎的暖诗~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-05-24 13:40:36 Post subject:

谢七七安红红 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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