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茧和家----给远方的人
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PostPosted: 2009-05-20 08:57:29    Post subject: 茧和家----给远方的人 Reply with quote

你掌上
比旧屋长得老
长得青
长得远的茧
又再次
立在故乡的小山
窗下
女人
和孩子的脸颊
早待在月光床上
十年前的抚摸
这时还有丝
刺的感觉
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今晚
墙与墙
围着
一家子的心室
天亮
阿爹的掌上
会耸起一座青山
让孩子们在爽笑中
迅速跨足
逾越
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PostPosted: 2009-05-20 16:09:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

阿爹的掌上
便耸起一座青山
让家远隔重洋
也要背着
去逾越
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 01:27:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好白水,改一下了
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 01:29:07    Post subject: hao a Reply with quote

好啊
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 05:39:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

东方文化向西方文化转化了 Confused
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 07:57:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

地球逆转一下,我们就是西方,只是是否,阳会转成阴,女会转成男,不知…问候韩,白,二先生!
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 09:43:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

让家远隔重洋
也要背着

会耸起一座青山
让孩子们在爽笑中
迅速跨足

不好意思,我把这变动理解成东西方对孩子的教育不同, 家长的责任和理念的不同了。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-23 15:01:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

呵呵,小孩好动,在回家父亲身边跨来越去,山与茧都是运动的结果,又有关连,不过形容太夸张了…
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