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《山溪》
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PostPosted: 2009-04-10 03:54:11    Post subject: 《山溪》 Reply with quote
从绿色山岭的叶纹里抬脚起步，开始尝试岩石外流浪的生涯。
听到小鸟在花丛中的歌声随着花香飘飞，年少的心就如雨后春笋般蠢蠢欲动，想象自己投身大海时的澎湃汹涌、惊涛骇浪的气势，和亲吻珊瑚礁、拥抱鲨鱼的疯狂情态。
不停地想象，不停地奔腾，不停地喧哗！
用嘹亮的歌喉，一展山岭情人的风采！
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William Zhou周道模
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PostPosted: 2009-04-11 14:08:55    Post subject: Reply with quote
似乎可以更细腻一些。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-31 23:36:18    Post subject: Reply with quote
天风神威多谢指点！ Embarassed
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