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圣美的舞蹈
雪松岩
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PostPosted: 2009-02-15 00:47:46    Post subject: 圣美的舞蹈 Reply with quote

缺少一条腿如同拥有两条腿一样,
他能将自己的技艺表演得淋漓尽致,
从他那优美的舞姿断定可知,
他的付出并没有出乎人们的希望。
要不是上帝的存心作弄,
想必此时的他可能在另一条路上谋生了,
可上帝偏偏让他意外地失去一条腿,
这好让他在舞台上如龙如虎。
打着拐杖并不影响他将舞蹈跳得好,
从他那通红的脸庞可知他的动作是发自内心的。
可我并不为他的缺憾感到担惊受怕,
他的舞伴反让我惊喜万分,
他们配合得很好,真的很好。
他们一会儿融合,一会儿分开,
他们如同两条柔美的溪流在缠绵;
又如两朵圣美的鲜花,
在月光下,他们合拢了又盛开。
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-15 04:25:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

他们如同两条柔美的溪流在缠绵;
又如两朵圣美的鲜花,
在月光下,他们合拢了又盛开。
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雪松岩
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PostPosted: 2009-02-15 23:15:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
他们如同两条柔美的溪流在缠绵;
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问好,白水
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PostPosted: 2009-02-15 23:50:05    Post subject: 优美~ Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
他们如同两条柔美的溪流在缠绵;
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尤其是结句~把舞蹈梦幻般的演绎一语概述~~

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雪松岩
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PostPosted: 2010-04-12 21:40:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
白水 Moonlight wrote:
他们如同两条柔美的溪流在缠绵;
...


尤其是结句~把舞蹈梦幻般的演绎一语概述~~


问候
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