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碧霄诗情
时东兵
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PostPosted: 2007-01-26 03:49:10    Post subject: 碧霄诗情 Reply with quote

欢迎光临时东兵的博客:http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1246222181

时东兵的诗

碧霄诗情

一声声虫鸣
跌落清瘦的弦月
与秋
渐行渐远的白云
一起酝酿
冬的童话

人是有思想的
芦苇 轻轻一握
抖落几多愁绪
杜甫独立苍苔
茅屋为秋风所破
而至尊的汉武帝
却为木枯叶黄
哀伤凄婉

霜叶盛开的山峦
点醒两岸的红
红漫过天际
漫过夏天的独舞
漫过春天的梦

落霞孤骛
秋水长天
秋的肢体
越来越苗条
而冬的思想
越来越丰满

秋阳仅是
冬天的封面
而我朝着
冬之门
把诗情引向
碧霄蓝天
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-01-26 18:02:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗情横溢了
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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 00:38:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言纯熟。功力深厚。形象优美。

不足是:化用前人句子过多,自己独创略微欠缺。个见,未必对。欢迎争论批评。

握手问好
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PostPosted: 2007-01-27 02:29:21    Post subject: Reply with quote

很喜欢这语言。
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PostPosted: 2007-02-02 01:31:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好各位诗友!
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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-02-02 01:54:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

我也喜欢这样的语言,呵呵!
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