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冬日莆田步行街触景
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 00:51:28    Post subject: 冬日莆田步行街触景 Reply with quote

冬日莆田步行街触景



真冷漠

石头路面,冰

枝叶上凝霜

他们的脚跟无情、深刻进石头的大气层



这里没有街头或者巷尾

有的只是古谯城楼上灯红

映着斜面酒吧的妖绿

任谁都失窃了真模样



谁是卖家?

一个一个都是亦步亦趋的

消蚀日月的虫蛹

红灯笼也醉了,酒吧的坐台两只蝴蝶

交欢后,兀自慢慢飞,然后死亡、繁殖



买家呢?同样没有

都在慢性自杀地

挥霍青春、燃烧生命、寄售灵魂

风起云涌,天寒萧条蔽体的黄叶零落

哪朵乌云裹挟走最美的花?已无人问津

醉眼模糊,每张嘴都说同样的话

一双双岁霓虹灯旋转的眼睛斗大

街中心水池里还有瞎了一只眼的蛤蟆

不懒惰,玩命地跳街舞,而不静坐

观天的眼睛没了光,仅仅发着绿光

光……



最后的街没了一个人

虽然我还愣着,

灵魂早随躯壳模样的人流躲进温床

夜深沉,我没看清。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 01:35:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢这首 境界很高 。。。

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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 17:23:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢.....谢谢
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PostPosted: 2007-01-30 22:48:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

李智强 wrote:
谢谢.....谢谢


别客气 多来坐坐

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PostPosted: 2007-02-01 21:24:28    Post subject: 很好 Reply with quote

这首写的很不错

非常有现代性
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PostPosted: 2007-02-02 04:05:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢迪拜老师欣赏,我前进的大动力!~
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