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You are my idol. <你是我的偶像>
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注册时间: 2009-05-05
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帖子发表于: 2009-05-17 03:06:12    发表主题: You are my idol. <你是我的偶像> 引用并回复

原創 <你是我的偶像> ( 黃亞拔)

你的聪明令我疯狂

你的情怀是无人有

你写的诗歌像河流

诗内充满着爱的佳话

我不能如你一样可比

你的写作似永没错误

你的诗艺时常都完美

朋友呀,可否做我老师

我猜一生都不能如你一样

当然你是我值得跟随的偶像

他会爱每个人和每种事物

曾经过对爱和憎恨的体验

我爱的诗人都如上面一样

你是否是其中如上述一位?

你是我曾经细心挑选的偶像

你是我心中的阳光和指引


< You Are My Idol > (Original by Albert Wong)

You are the smartest guy, whom I’ve met.
Your emotional feeling no body owned.
The poetry you wrote like a stream thought.
The poem is having a full love and best words.

I can’t do it as what you have been showing.
There seems no mistake can be found ever.
The performance of your poetry is often perfect.
Oh, my friend, can you to become my teacher?

Every thing you write into a piece is loveliest.
When shall I do exactly as what you can do?
I believe I can’t do like yours in my whole life.
Surely you are my only idol whom I have to follow.

A good poet must have a pure lovely heart.
He must be a full emotional feature in poetry;
He loves every body and everything in his heart.
There are love and hateful matters he has suffered.

I love those poets, who have as above mentioned,
Are you one of those who I have described?
You are of my idols as I have carefully selected.
You really are my sunshine and a teller by my side.
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