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春天之前
沙漠
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PostPosted: 2007-01-28 01:57:50    Post subject: 春天之前 Reply with quote
春天之前

传统的废墟上
我极力留住善良和温暖
——题记

远去了丁香和油纸伞
小巷的枯树挂满房子的黄叶
一个颠覆之夜把它连根拔起
这是我的南方，它不适合
你的忧郁，以及回忆中的残雪

老照片的温度冷却已久
世界多了一些门窗、锁和护栏
陈年的柴薪在风中狼籍着
谁细心拣起未灭的火星
驱赶心中的寒冷与霉变

我在残瓦逢里种下花草
阳光和南风。这是废墟上的童话
像我小小的孤独的春天
穿过阴晴不定的人群，一心北上
赶在纯洁的时辰，打开你的白色柜子


《风信子》

还是欲赋新诗强说愁的年纪
我常常用这个诗意的词语
迷惑同样诗意的女孩。后来我记不清
那个女孩是不是
插入人字雁阵一起南飞的

透过风中的寒意，我听到枫叶起步的声音
但我记得，那时的秋风
没有预示这一次滴血的迁徙

多年以后，一场纷飞的雪花
缀上她洁白的婚纱
那一夜，寒风拍落了枝头最后一片
翘首的叶


325700 浙江省洞头县霓北中学 姚志强
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PostPosted: 2007-01-28 03:30:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
不错。但看不出是那个写离歌赋的人写的 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-28 04:09:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
厚重~ Very Happy
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和平岛
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PostPosted: 2007-01-28 20:38:25    Post subject: Reply with quote
风格确实很不一样

离歌赋很简洁
这个的述说繁杂得多
Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 01:38:36    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好　新朋友　。。

Cool
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PostPosted: 2007-01-29 04:25:40    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好朋友们！
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PostPosted: 2007-01-30 22:46:09    Post subject: Re: 春天之前 Reply with quote
沙漠 wrote:
春天之前

传统的废墟上
我极力留住善良和温暖
——题记

没有丁香没有油纸伞
小巷也像一杆枯老的树干
被连根拔起。两旁的旧房子
飘摇的黄叶一样离去
这是我的南方，它不适合
你的忧郁，以及回忆中的残雪

老照片的温度冷却已久
现在的房子多了一些门窗
也多了一些锁和护栏
陈年的柴薪在风中狼籍着
谁细心拣起未灭的火星
驱赶心中的寒冷与霉变

我在残瓦逢里种下花草
阳光和南风。这是废墟上的童话
像我小小的孤独的春天
穿过阴晴不定的人群
一心北上，赶在纯洁的时辰
打开你的白色柜子
2007.01.27

325700 浙江省洞头县霓北中学 姚志强

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