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记忆，瞬间凝结

陈子寒
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Posted: 2009-04-12 21:05:41 Post subject: 记忆，瞬间凝结

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云冰之南
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Posted: 2009-04-12 22:11:21 Post subject:

拜读了,诗意深情!

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-13 16:16:49 Post subject:

很美的意境

陈子寒
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Posted: 2009-04-13 18:28:55 Post subject:

诗歌是神秘的吗？诗歌是高雅的吗？诗歌不是神秘的。诗歌也不是高雅的。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shakesthunder我的博客上刚刚更新了,上面有诗歌散文小说，去看看啊

陈子寒
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Posted: 2009-04-17 04:27:35 Post subject:

作为一个诗歌作者，当我们看到文学作品时，赞扬一个多一个诗人，批评一个少一个诗人，同样对于读者赞扬一个多一个读者，批评一个少一个读者。还是多宽容，多理解吧。那样才会有越来越多的人写诗，越来越多的人读诗，诗歌才会繁荣。 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shakesthunder我的博客上刚刚更新了,上面有诗歌散文小说，去看看啊

白水
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Posted: 2009-04-18 02:47:59 Post subject:

陈子寒 wrote:

作为一个诗歌作者，当我们看到文学作品时，赞扬一个多一个诗人，批评一个少一个诗人，同样对于读者赞扬一个多一个读者，批评一个少一个读者。还是多宽容，多理解吧。那样才会有越来越多的人写诗，越来越多的人读诗，诗歌才会繁荣。
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说得好！让大家都来做理解他人的读者，多给诗友回帖，多一点鼓励，赞扬和互动。共勉

hepingdao
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Posted: 2009-04-18 04:30:49 Post subject:

很切题, 因为要写,才有诗人 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

安红红
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Posted: 2009-04-18 04:37:50 Post subject:

认真看诗~努力回贴~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

nobody
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Posted: 2009-04-18 12:13:04 Post subject:

支持不一定取赞扬的形式，但支持的态度一定可以感觉得到。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

陈子寒
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Posted: 2009-04-18 14:32:25 Post subject:

楼层太高，找不到你的窗，细节摧毁着一切

zmj166
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Posted: 2009-04-18 23:57:13 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

陈子寒 wrote:

说得好！让大家都来做理解他人的读者，多给诗友回帖，多一点鼓励，赞扬和互动。共勉

在这里又看到了子寒的影子，一位勤奋的作家啊！ Very Happy

赵福治
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Posted: 2009-04-22 03:48:37 Post subject:

梦中我看到你了看到你的车灯在眨眼睛！ ...............对诗歌的喜爱一直不改,问好兄弟.

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