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红窗听一叹春

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-04-17 22:45:36 Post subject: 红窗听一叹春

窗外风狂沙乱舞，寒又顾、柳芽轻绿。闲来无事书词后，念桃花园趣。觅得流莺歌转处，新装好、身如蝶梦。春难久住，问谁伤感，可知何时续？

黄洋界
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Posted: 2009-04-18 15:28:59 Post subject:

又见"柳芽青绿", 殷勤留春久住!问好莹雪! _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-04-18 16:30:57 Post subject:

春虽来，难久住。莹雪MM伤春词。风狂沙乱舞。三燕故都风沙很大吗？

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Posted: 2009-04-18 17:21:25 Post subject:

问好妹妹

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-04-18 17:37:07 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

又见"柳芽青绿",

殷勤留春久住!问好莹雪!

谢您点评！问好！

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-04-18 17:39:59 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

春虽来，难久住。莹雪MM伤春词。
风狂沙乱舞。三燕故都风沙很大吗？

没有伤春，有些感慨而已 Razz

是啊！我们这风沙很大的。

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-04-18 17:41:27 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

问好妹妹

问好姐姐

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-04-19 14:17:27 Post subject:

“春难久住，问谁伤感，可知何时续？” 从来春光苦短，没奈何，只把新词度。问好！

白云闲人
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Posted: 2009-04-19 16:18:19 Post subject:

"觅得流莺歌转处",好句! 问好! _________________ 诗中岁月, 笛里关山.

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Posted: 2009-04-19 17:19:39 Post subject:

米运刚 wrote:

“春难久住，
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谢谢点评！问好

莹雪
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Posted: 2009-04-19 17:20:55 Post subject:

白云闲人 wrote:

"觅得流莺歌转处",好句!
问好!

谢谢，问好！

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