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花事

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Posted: 2007-01-26 12:59:59 Post subject: 花事

花事 ――写给一位在病魔中渴望的青春女孩春天　人间的黑夜蕴藏着一种神秘的力量花儿的脚步细碎　犹如婴儿临近生命之门的叩响迈过虚无与实在的边缘即使是在含苞欲放的瞬间透过凌晨的水露与寒冷花儿能预见自己的宿命――归落泥土仍旧带着烂漫的风流向着古老的人间栅栏献上她阔绰的锦红今夜的花香来自婴儿熟睡的家园点点滴滴浸透人类的梦梦里　金色的长梯悬浮在天界的圣殿与居民的屋廓之间摇曳的天梯被煦光中的花和绿叶覆盖最后的玫瑰也在燃烧你的魂忧郁在花儿争郉斗艳的山谷里流浪对着垂直的天梯坦诚地表示着进退两难连斐然青色的坟茔也魅人地花影重重你对花的坚信甘拜下风了沉睡于你初来于世的恬静中１９９８，３月于芝加哥 _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-01-26 16:20:46 Post subject:

今夜的花香来自婴儿熟睡的家园好。本诗很值得一写。情绪饱满之余，可对生死问题作顺理成章的自然切入。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2007-01-26 18:11:21 Post subject:

沉睡于你初来于世的恬静中首尾相衔喜欢 _________________ 写诗是为了写更好的诗

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Posted: 2007-01-26 20:25:28 Post subject:

nobody wrote:

今夜的花香
来自婴儿熟睡的家园
好。

本诗很值得一写。情绪饱满之余，可对生死问题作顺理成章的自然切入。

生与死.诗的永恒主题. 谢谢nobody.多交流.
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Posted: 2007-01-26 20:46:02 Post subject:

非常好的选题, 读来让人感动

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Posted: 2007-01-27 15:42:08 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

非常好的选题, 读来让人感动

谢谢月光.诗让我们不陌生.
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Posted: 2007-01-27 20:55:54 Post subject:

非常优美。扣问生死的抒情，有着花，影，雾，月混合成的朦胧美。欢迎问好新朋友握手问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

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Posted: 2007-01-28 15:06:00 Post subject:

谢谢司马策风的访问. 多交流. 问好. _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-01-29 01:40:41 Post subject: Re: 花事

刘雨萍 wrote:

花事

――写给一位在病魔中渴望的青春女孩

春天　人间的黑夜蕴藏着
一种神秘的力量
花儿的脚步细碎　犹如
婴儿临近生命之门的叩响
迈过虚无与实在的边缘

即使是在含苞欲放的瞬间
透过凌晨的水露与寒冷
花儿能预见自己的宿命――归落泥土
仍旧带着烂漫的风流
向着古老的人间栅栏
献上她阔绰的锦红

今夜的花香
来自婴儿熟睡的家园
点点滴滴浸透人类的梦
梦里　金色的长梯
悬浮在天界的圣殿
与居民的屋廓之间
摇曳的天梯
被煦光中的花和绿叶覆盖
最后的玫瑰也在燃烧

你的魂忧郁
在花儿争郉斗艳的山谷里
流浪
对着垂直的天梯
坦诚地表示着进退两难

连斐然青色的坟茔
也魅人地花影重重
你对花的坚信甘拜下风了

沉睡于
你初来于世的恬静中

１９９８，３月于芝加哥

欢迎　新朋友　喜欢你的文字　。。

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Posted: 2007-01-29 10:03:10 Post subject:

谢谢Kokho的阅读. 问好 _________________ 隔海抒情

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Posted: 2007-01-30 22:48:16 Post subject:

刘雨萍 wrote:

谢谢Kokho的阅读. 问好

希望你多来交流

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