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一曲新词酒一杯

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Posted: 2009-04-12 02:38:23 Post subject: 一曲新词酒一杯

春日迟迟一手握笔，一手持杯坐在去年的亭台酒与诗一进一出，一出一进不知谁先会底朝天 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2009-04-12 20:13:43 Post subject:

牛仔很忙！ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-04-14 14:14:47 Post subject:

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牛仔很忙！

谁接着来？

《浣溪沙》晏殊
一曲新词酒一杯，去年天气旧池台，夕阳西下几时回？
无可奈何花落去，似曾相识燕归来，小园香径独徘徊。
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Posted: 2009-04-14 17:09:52 Post subject: 我来，这词太美。我都不知道选哪句好了

_________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-14 18:35:43 Post subject: 小园香径独徘徊

小园香径独徘徊落英纷纷一手扶风，一手抚香杳杳魂游桃花径侬和花相拥相扶，相扶相拥不知谁更不胜轻风 _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-15 04:03:46 Post subject:

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小园香径独徘徊
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第二节，很妙！

侬和花
相拥相扶，相扶相拥
不知谁更不胜轻风

极具动感的惜春图。佳人如花，花如佳人，惺惺相惜，这是典型的中国美境。 Smile

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Posted: 2009-04-15 17:25:36 Post subject:

似曾相识燕归来一只兴冲冲的归燕勤快地衔着春天的泥巴在一首唐诗里筑窝和它点了点头穿过懒散的雨巷我去吃一碗扬州炒饭 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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Posted: 2009-04-16 05:08:21 Post subject: 这格式？

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牛仔很忙！

谁接着来？
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自由呐喊
从古自今，从东到西
人与人
你争我夺，相互攻击
不知谁得到真自由
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Posted: 2009-04-16 10:36:54 Post subject:

无可奈何花落去小桥流水奈何落花，奈何落泪凭栏粉色的午后浅情与寂寞叠叠错错，错错叠叠回不去最初的那一凝眸

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Posted: 2009-04-16 11:08:39 Post subject: 你去吃炒饭，对路吗？

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似曾相识燕归来
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Posted: 2009-04-16 18:09:33 Post subject: 夕阳西下几时回

夕阳醉至深处一半落海，一半倚天又是一次崖岸铺纸着墨的送别待我写尽一夜香墨你会不会又盈盈冉冉冉冉盈盈的向我走来？ _________________ 梦的一端是我脉脉的凝视，而另一端是你清澈的眼睛。

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Posted: 2009-04-17 01:02:24 Post subject:

啊！是酱子玩的哪～ _________________ 可情可理，去捧就真

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Posted: 2009-04-17 04:20:50 Post subject: 去年天气旧池台

去年天气旧池台生绿锈的铜铃，还是很好听鱼儿在莲池中亲着一朵去年飘来白云亭檐下，呵呵的笑容在一只古老黝黑陶罐上露出洁白的牙 _________________ 瞠目结舌

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