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《故宫》

海洋
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Posted: 2007-01-23 07:22:20 Post subject: 《故宫》

《故宫》不是一座城是一段班驳岁月城早已故去我只能沉入沧桑城的嗓音不停穿过耳膜他的光影直达瞳孔厚重如一记响雷激烈似一道电闪然而幽幽许多帝王的灵魂金殿上飞出在我的头顶尽是飘渺瞬息间心随幽灵们漫舞触摸了所有血脉可无须张扬平息了的目光走出静默宫墙步伐将从容加速可惜祖先看不见我的脚步我已在千百年后重见辉煌 _________________ 诗是灵魂的歌唱

闲雅
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Posted: 2007-01-23 18:58:23 Post subject:

喜欢历史题材！问好，握手！ _________________ 闲情只自谴雅趣向谁言

hepingdao
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Posted: 2007-01-23 18:59:13 Post subject:

想象的感觉历史瞬间的回眸，知多少 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

海洋
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Posted: 2007-01-24 02:00:46 Post subject:

闲雅 wrote:

喜欢历史题材！

问好，握手！

问好闲雅
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海洋
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Posted: 2007-01-24 02:05:27 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

想象的感觉
历史瞬间的回眸，知多少

问好hepingdao
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杯中冲浪
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Posted: 2007-01-24 06:40:24 Post subject:

缺乏让人心动的东西。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

海洋
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Posted: 2007-01-24 06:55:09 Post subject:

杯中冲浪 wrote:

缺乏让人心动的东西。

那是你的心太硬了,呵呵.
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白水
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Posted: 2007-01-24 07:38:50 Post subject:

走出围城, 回眸的让它故去

司马策风
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Posted: 2007-01-24 23:57:31 Post subject:

跳跃，回荡，有穿透力。错觉，末节较为出色，但结束早了一点，似可深发下去。个见，未必对。欢迎常来，握手问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

海洋
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Posted: 2007-01-25 08:09:06 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

走出围城, 回眸的让它故去

问好白水
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海洋
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Posted: 2007-01-26 01:41:17 Post subject:

司马策风 wrote:

跳跃，回荡，有穿透力。

错觉，末节较为出色，但结束早了一点，似可深发下去。个见，未必对。

欢迎常来，

握手问好

问好司马策风
握手
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诗是灵魂的歌唱

海洋
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Posted: 2007-01-27 08:17:11 Post subject:

再次问好各位 _________________ 诗是灵魂的歌唱

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