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七绝 韩信（新韵）
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PostPosted: 2009-05-08 13:08:47    Post subject: 七绝 韩信（新韵） Reply with quote
七绝 韩信（新韵）

萧何月下追韩信，始有乌江困霸王。
鸟尽弓折良将命，云飞歌起仍苍凉。

（叶剑英元帅1954年有借古喻今诗句：忽忆刘亭长，苍凉唱大风。）
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PostPosted: 2009-05-08 13:21:05    Post subject: Reply with quote
这组诗歌很有内涵， 欣赏。
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PostPosted: 2009-05-08 14:20:30    Post subject: Reply with quote
白水 Moonlight wrote:
这组诗歌很有内涵， 欣赏。


谢白水兄雅赏！
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PostPosted: 2009-05-09 04:26:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
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七绝 韩信
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折字仄声,此句出律了.
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PostPosted: 2009-05-09 05:02:12    Post subject: Reply with quote
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qinghongh wrote:
七绝 韩信
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折字仄声,此句出律了.


谢谢指出。折：新韵二声。权按新韵。我本想用“收”字，但折更表折毁之意。
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