qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2009-05-08 13:08:47 Post subject: 七绝 韩信(新韵) |
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七绝 韩信(新韵)
萧何月下追韩信,始有乌江困霸王。
鸟尽弓折良将命,云飞歌起仍苍凉。
(叶剑英元帅1954年有借古喻今诗句:忽忆刘亭长,苍凉唱大风。) |
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白水 大学士

Joined: 02 Oct 2006 Posts: 14102 Location: TORONTO 白水Collection |
Posted: 2009-05-08 13:21:05 Post subject: |
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这组诗歌很有内涵, 欣赏。 |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2009-05-08 14:20:30 Post subject: |
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白水 Moonlight wrote: |
这组诗歌很有内涵, 欣赏。 |
谢白水兄雅赏! |
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自然风 童生
Joined: 20 Feb 2009 Posts: 53
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Posted: 2009-05-09 04:26:51 Post subject: |
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qinghongh wrote: |
七绝 韩信
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折字仄声,此句出律了. |
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qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
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Posted: 2009-05-09 05:02:12 Post subject: |
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自然风 wrote: |
qinghongh wrote: |
七绝 韩信
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折字仄声,此句出律了. |
谢谢指出。折:新韵二声。权按新韵。我本想用“收”字,但折更表折毁之意。 |
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