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有鹿的森林
张凡修
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PostPosted: 2009-04-11 18:26:53    Post subject: 有鹿的森林 Reply with quote

有鹿的森林

河北/张凡修

敖鲁古雅的鄂温克,是中国惟一饲养驯鹿的人群。
  ——题记


鄂温克人宽大的袖子,揣着
一窝鹿崽走了三百年
这一天,来到大兴安岭南麓
红松林,樟松林,落叶松林
伸出了与鄂温克人一样的袖子
袖子里,几根手指比划着价钱

于是,一窝鹿崽与一茎嫩草,
一丛水洼,一声狗吠,一顶帐篷
以及一场雨一场雪成交
而只有一场雨一场雪
才能清晰地辩认,大森林
那一朵朵
梅花的蹄印
正悄悄觅食在鄂温克人的鼾声里


他们察觉不出,中原的一支箭
早已相中了一个全新旅游景点
从骨子发出兴奋的口哨
穿透一只更加宽大的袖子
剩下的,就是数钱的事儿了


064102河北玉田县鸦鸿桥镇河东村
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白水
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PostPosted: 2009-04-12 04:13:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

写真。。。 。。。
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南闽老茂
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PostPosted: 2009-04-13 14:29:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

有味道,细腻真切的,欣赏!
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榛莽
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PostPosted: 2009-04-13 22:40:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

在其他论坛看过了,再品!

他们察觉不出,中原的一支箭
早已相中了一个全新旅游景点
从骨子发出兴奋的口哨
穿透一只更加宽大的袖子
剩下的,就是数钱的事儿了


一个民族的生态新变,令人深思!
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张凡修
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PostPosted: 2009-04-13 23:35:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢大家........
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吟啸徐行
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PostPosted: 2009-04-13 23:38:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

从大处着眼,从高处着眼,大比喻,深比喻,有意境.
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安红红
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PostPosted: 2009-04-14 07:19:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

学习~
问好~
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