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大地

lingquan.yang
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Posted: 2009-04-15 21:54:29 Post subject: 大地

滚滚流逝如江水宇宙的物事大地的英雄和功业四季的色彩一代代子孙脊梁太阳的光辉挽着朝夕的霞光大地的巨船驶向激情的惊涛骇浪我要歌唱，许是我嘶哑的喉嗓难以承传这项宏伟的工程兀自焦灼，但我自信别有韵味大地的船只在急速流淌的江流上要航向何方一代代人群的灰烬他们的想象和向往一代代英雄魅惑的容颜自星月的浓夜的峰谷间闪耀在宇宙的洪流两岸谁在颂唱掀起澎湃的波浪这汹涌的激流兀自在我的内心几至要崩裂我的胸腔让我在阴晦浓云的地带歌哭竟惹得漫天落叶萧萧的金黄眼前绿色和果实像五彩的江水不停流逝不停流逝承载大地的船只飘荡 _________________ 走在历险的途中

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Posted: 2009-04-16 05:50:13 Post subject:

内在有激情.

lingquan.yang
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Posted: 2009-04-19 16:32:12 Post subject:

赵福治 wrote:

内在有激情.

谢谢赵兄的评点，安好文康！
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