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我发现世界年轻了十岁(外2首)

吟啸徐行
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Posted: 2009-06-12 15:56:06 Post subject: 我发现世界年轻了十岁(外2首)

我发现世界年轻了十岁我一直坚持白发是一种自然规律为显示豁达从不介意一次　我走进一家发廊老板是一位中年女性她夸我帅　有气质并要对我提出点建议诚恳的态度让我不忍拒绝她说　大凡美好的事物都离不开点染　是吧生活　就是不断寻找凭借走回年轻我乖乖接受她的打理染了发　整了发型当她端过镜子帮我照时我发现世界忽然年轻了十岁落花流水这曾让多少人伤感但我要敬佩一朵落花的选择凋谢　也拒绝玷污委身一处清净让比眸子还亮的流水载着它的灵魂能走多远就走多远坐车见闻车门打开乘客们纷纷下车而与我一道来的那只苍蝇还滞留在车内它要乘此车原路返回回到千里外的故土也许在车进站的刹那我们都动了乡思而我必须留下在他乡　继续做我的游子羡慕你　苍蝇也祝福你　苍蝇回吧　快快地回吧请带回我一路平安的消息 _________________ 彰显自我爱好,弘扬民族文化,追求诗意生活.

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Posted: 2009-06-12 16:46:46 Post subject:

第一首有生活情趣，第二首写得干净，第三首留给别人评吧

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