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[投稿]致我的艺术老师(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2009-04-04 22:54:07    Post subject: [投稿]致我的艺术老师(组诗) Reply with quote

[b]致我的艺术老师(组诗)[/b]
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[b]欣赏你的剪纸[/b]

是你把艺术带进田野
还是田野把你带进艺术

画笔,红纸,刻刀
勾勒出四季开花的乡土
黑白图案,栩栩如生
构成了王经田的行为艺术

让人吃一惊的时候或许
一生也等不到
你依然钉在旧藤椅上
画猪马牛羊,画梨桃麦谷
潮湿渗透到关节里
春风一吹便隐隐作疼

从煤油灯到白炽灯
一幅农耕的剪纸,像版画
装饰着复兴文化馆
那扇透风低矮的玻璃窗户

[b]听说你的胃不好[/b]

那次你捂住肚子上完课
听说你的肠胃不好
我一直也没有去看望你

后来有个女生也肠胃不好
送给你一瓶养胃舒
你还是肠胃不好
再后来你的远投就投不中篮

艺术课改成了自习
你要到上海去做手术
切割癌变的直肠
我们对视着目光慈慈的

你说,剪了一辈子纸也该
让人给剪一回
那个女同学的眼泪就出来了

[b] 读到你的去讯[/b]

在一个北风的凌晨
读到你的去讯
满天星斗,满地寒霜

仰望天宇
你是黑纸上的哪个光斑
请允许我采撷星光为你写悼词
采撷霜光为你写挽联

肉体多么易朽呵
你用一条银河告诉我
先看到生命的尽头
再回过头来握紧未逝的时光

恩师,如果允许
我情愿做一粒
宇宙中微不足道的尘埃
俯首走进你的剪纸里

[b]经常梦里见到你[/b]

你的画稿堆积如山
你一脸一手的墨
你把安徽日报发表的作品
拿给我看 ,要我挑刺

还是那头花白的竖发
还是那身洗得发白的灰西服
还是那把绑满绷带的藤椅
还是那支染黑的狼毫
还是那把老布裹柄的刻刀

你一点也没改变
时而用手捂住肚子
恩师,天堂的乡镇文化馆
也这么低矮潮湿吗

[b]我来为你做模特 [/b]

请让我来为你做模特
恩师,如果允许
我们就来一次君子约定

当我把肉体交还泥土
灵魂花朵样站在你的画室中
看你一笔一笔勾画轮廓
一笔一笔点染精神

我浑身闪烁时代的光芒
我满口呼吸新农村的空气
我展现给你全新的乡土底片
八零后的精,气,神

你画着剪着窗外就有了曙色
你画着剪着就返老还童


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PostPosted: 2009-04-05 03:33:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言自然,生动.欢迎新朋友
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 02:22:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好诗友,远握!
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PostPosted: 2009-04-06 07:10:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

保持这最朴素的情感创作吧~无论是剪纸亦事写诗~有一种优良的品质贯穿所从事的事情~只要执着的走下去~总会有好结果的~

问好~多来~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-08 20:00:40    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好诗友,为诗歌喝彩,为诗歌憔悴!
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