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春天的斧子
cyansharp
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PostPosted: 2009-04-01 00:57:16    Post subject: 春天的斧子 Reply with quote

春天的斧子

那一天 相逢
在春天的斧子上

劈开你花蕾的眼睛
不过是我饱含的泪水
你看 满世界都是爱情的妖精
缀满裙子的花枝

赶在春天结束之前
一遍遍复述你身体里的河流
直到那些热眼开始结冰

其实 是你在枝头驱赶花朵的凋零
哦 不要
不要在春天的水面上
用理性的竹篮打捞我

不然 春天的斧子永无休止
骑在三月怒放的伤口

2009.3.16
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2009-04-05 12:17:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

几个都喜欢,长短适宜,常有奇思。
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子花
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PostPosted: 2009-04-08 02:05:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

满世界都是爱情的妖精
缀满裙子的花枝
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PostPosted: 2009-04-09 10:40:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

尽量清晰主题~词澡美丽是次要的~

问好~
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