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叙 述(外一首)
秋水一笑
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 18:24:10    Post subject: 叙 述(外一首) Reply with quote

叙 述(外一首)

叙 述

阳光
最早是从我的身体
泄密出去的
黑夜已难以撑住
即将被女人撕破的颜面
逃之夭夭
剩下一地
被一夜春风
吹下的绿色落叶
这个叙述
发生在昨夜与今天早晨
屋外的一切
不像春天
却很像
我初恋时惊慌而羞涩的眼神


生长在周家祠堂屋檐上的一棵梧桐树

生长在周家祠堂屋檐上的
一棵梧桐树
不知是什么时候的事情了

那片瓦砾是贫瘠的
比我的骨头更干裂
这是我一直这么认定的定律

梧桐树长的很好
今天,与同事的谈话
再次看它得出的结论

冰冻、酷暑
都已过去
几片绿意盎然的叶子
摇曳着春天
让我的定律瓦解的一塌糊涂
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Location: 山东济宁
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PostPosted: 2009-04-07 18:56:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

我读着好有层次感哦!
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