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陌生，男人和女人

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Posted: 2009-04-02 00:21:54 Post subject: 陌生，男人和女人

陌生，男人和女人陈子寒 1 扭曲的欲望混杂在丑陋的身体酒精的作用越发膨胀人坐在角落相拥缠绵丑陋无比陌生人，身边注视着周遭，举杯浅浅地笑 2 狂欢参在其中像异类白净的脸，无框眼镜来赴约的一个理由眼神四周游离用手指抵住耳朵耳边说话轻轻地飘进，听到…… 3 表，不时扫一眼手表分针很慢时针也很慢等它们合二为一酒精的魅力清醒中勇敢不清醒中变得真实坐在一群扭动的躯体中间光与影的暧昧越发凸显的苍白伸出手跳舞 4 站对面散开海藻般的长发放肆地挥霍寂寞看着眼睛微笑靠近身体旋，转，绽放手很柔软暖暖的很小心触摸手指伸出身后环住腰双手从肩膀滑到手腕突然说 “乖，怎么这么瘦？” 神经像突然停电的大厦… http://blog.sina.com.cn/shakesthunder

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Posted: 2009-04-05 12:04:21 Post subject:

“乖，怎么这么瘦？” 神经像突然停电的大厦… 很有现场感和写实意义，值得好好加工下。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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