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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 17:30:19    Post subject: [原创]发几首拜坛 Reply with quote
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 17:37:34    Post subject: Reply with quote
初读了一下,感觉很不错的几首, 改日细品.

欢迎新朋友.顺便说一句,吸烟有害健康,儿童就更不宜了 Very Happy Very Happy

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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 20:20:54    Post subject: Reply with quote
点根烟，交个朋友嘛，问好
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PostPosted: 2009-04-02 22:52:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
解剖自已和生活剃须刀是远远不够的~散打也不够~~
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接着写~俺要看看短刀和长剑的样子~~
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PostPosted: 2009-04-03 14:38:31    Post subject: Reply with quote
问好，铸造中……
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PostPosted: 2009-04-03 15:30:21    Post subject: Reply with quote
隐晦的厉害，语感不错，如果表达清晰一些，才好。
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