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哀歌
cyansharp
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PostPosted: 2009-04-01 01:00:08    Post subject: 哀歌 Reply with quote

哀歌

坐在亚洲寒冷的中心
太阳的草帽下
是一座雪山的沸腾

请问 深陷爱情的人
你知道吗

沉沉黑夜
寂静的大雪
委身于漆黑的重量

抛开时间的重压
一匹孤狼的哀歌
在故乡的屋梁上

伏击一个绝命的人
大地嘴唇兀自冰凉

春宵一刻
谁将擦干自己的血手
辞别生活的水面

2009.3.20
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nobody
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PostPosted: 2009-04-05 12:16:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

稍显不流畅,但仍觉得很有重量。欣赏。
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