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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 07:28:54    Post subject: 牧童遥指杏花村 Reply with quote

牧童遥指杏花村

<状元红>

风流倜傥的
不作状元
不为忧天下事而忧
乐天下事而乐
乐,有几天?

悠悠千载,
几多状元头落地
唯你落第,落第的你
潇洒得笑
一笑丑女多作怪,二笑劳燕必纷飞
三笑就笑来相府的丫鬟
啼笑也是姻缘
笑,就笑个痛快,笑一个百世
流芳,笑一个肝肠寸断。

真风流者,不作状元

<女儿红>

不煮青梅,不骑竹马
女儿只在塞外
伴江南才子。红袖不添香
只添酒。酒乡温柔,纵然榜眼
也会醉的。沉醉的榜眼 不见大漠孤烟
不见西风瘦马,更不见长河落日
圆。圆圆的犹如女儿
羞红的面颊
醉了,一扇桃花

<竹叶青>

开城门,出山寨,摘一片竹叶作舟
踏歌而行。行在西域
之西,与东方之最接吻
你终于吐出那棵相思的红豆
点燃海的柔情

夜,脱下墨色之浓苦
把一杯醇香的咖啡摆在
清晨的餐桌上
冰糖就免了,蜂蜜也免了
这些动物和植物的精髓
每一次摄取
就提醒着一次杀生

浅梦初醒,醒于莲花让泪水渗入根茎
如果透明的指骨
真的能够化为圆寂的舍利子
你将义无反顾,折了这青青的竹枝
为探花的春日殉情

<剑南春>

挑灯看剑,剑不出鞘
弟弟, 今天的你
不再是那个国难当头的匹夫
朝南 坐北
南方那湾湛蓝湛蓝的海水啊
盈满 一个东方女子
五千年的泪珠,弟弟
你可听见

灯下语软。软语不予状元, 更不予
咬文嚼字的酸秀才,只说
与你,怀胎十月的男儿
莫滞龙潭 扬帆
出舰。弟弟
今天的你就是那条叱咤风云的蛟龙
雪刃向南

方刚血气挑亮生命的渔火
春天的西沙
群岛绿了,绿在东方女子的心海
五千年温软的蓝田美玉
暖暖生烟
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 07:36:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

看来读了什么有趣的书
洒脱又温柔
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 15:31:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

一组酒曲,古典得很~
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 17:01:59    Post subject: Reply with quote

洒脱飘逸, 气定山河. 欣赏.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 18:54:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
看来读了什么有趣的书
洒脱又温柔


你怎么猜到有外力 Confused
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 18:56:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
一组酒曲,古典得很~


是吗?我才发现古人比今人潇洒就借了几句 Wink
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 18:57:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

风动 wrote:
洒脱飘逸, 气定山河. 欣赏.


问好风动,谢谢鼓励.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-15 19:11:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

古韵悠悠,文字潇洒,诗意浓浓,好。问候你
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PostPosted: 2009-03-16 23:12:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

很美的意境~~

喜欢!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-17 00:39:26    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy 与往不同,好。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-17 13:56:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

问好阿未,阿依, 刘浪.
试着回拜了一次祖诗爷, 状元, 榜眼, 探花都拜了, 秀才还没顾上 Razz
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 15:57:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

是否从唐诗宋词走来,散发着古典的芳菲,是否常在郊外踏青,在长满青苔的石板路行走。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 18:00:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

美酒偏从白水来
沾唇一滴醉千载
诗仙不知何处去
游子彼岸抛风采
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PostPosted: 2009-03-19 15:29:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

一身灰 wrote:
是否从唐诗宋词走来,散发着古典的芳菲,是否常在郊外踏青,在长满青苔的石板路行走。


问好一身灰, 临屏草和,见笑Embarassed

七绝《答一身灰》
诗词信手宋唐来,雅典芳菲雾里栽
郊外神游石板路,茅台不醉醉青苔
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PostPosted: 2009-03-19 15:34:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 wrote:
美酒偏从白水来
沾唇一滴醉千载
诗仙不知何处去
游子彼岸抛风采


临屏草和,老师见笑。

七绝《和山城子》
榜眼涌泉佳酿来,探花枝断酒盅栽
诗仙不赋状元曲,醉里挑灯笑秀才

尽写酒了,老师千万别以为我是个酒鬼。其实我不喝酒,只是写着好玩Razz
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PostPosted: 2009-03-19 15:37:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

<剑南春>

挑灯看剑,剑不出鞘
弟弟, 今天的你
不再是那个国难当头的匹夫
朝南 坐北
南方那湾湛蓝湛蓝的海水啊
盈满 一个东方女子
五千年的泪珠,弟弟
你可听见

灯下语软。软语不予状元, 更不予
咬文嚼字的酸秀才,只说
与你,怀胎十月的男儿
莫滞龙潭 扬帆
出舰。弟弟
今天的你就是那条叱咤风云的蛟龙
雪刃向南

方刚血气挑亮生命的渔火
春天的西沙
群岛绿了,绿在东方女子的心海
五千年温软的蓝田美玉
暖暖生烟

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PostPosted: 2009-03-20 17:31:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

山城子 写到 wrote:
美酒偏从白水来
沾唇一滴醉千载
诗仙不知何处去
游子彼岸抛风采


临屏草和,老师见笑。

七绝《和山城子》
榜眼涌泉佳酿来,探花枝断酒盅栽
诗仙不赋状元曲,醉里挑灯笑秀才

尽写酒了,老师千万别以为我是个酒鬼。其实我不喝酒,只是写着好玩

和白水的《和山城子》
闲来无事渡洋来,且看友人将雅栽
雅酿化歌一曲曲,怀乡块垒巾帼才
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PostPosted: 2009-03-21 18:32:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢老师和诗. 问好.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-21 19:24:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

潇洒呀,别有韵味!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-22 03:28:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

颇有古典韵味的几首,细品欣赏,问好白水!
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