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小芍药的高跟鞋
韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 15:11:43    Post subject: 小芍药的高跟鞋 Reply with quote

小芍药的高跟鞋



我是那只小松鼠

叼一颗松籽儿

朝拜太阳



谢谢阳光 你是我的

爸爸 爷爷 爷爷的爷爷

很多云朵 洁白的花

都献给你 甘心熔化



也只有衷心的致谢

我们理解不了 你

孤独的燃烧



小芍药 穿着高跟鞋

也来了 她够不着你

一大早 就急哭了



是的

世间没有 和你匹配的情人

太阳啊

感谢你孤独的一生

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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 17:34:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言活泼,思想深刻。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 20:57:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

构思独特,问好.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 23:15:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言活泼,思想深刻。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-06 23:54:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

小勺药,高跟鞋,太阳……一组令人思考的文字
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 04:21:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

喜欢高跟鞋.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 14:37:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

童趣,哲思。 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 22:24:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

构思独特,问好.
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 10:42:58    Post subject: 谢 Reply with quote

谢 江南雨 白水 一品红 山桃花 江南雨 湮雨朦朦 沙漠

各位支持。问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 15:25:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

太阳啊

感谢你孤独的一生
喜欢结尾,问好。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-09 18:44:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

构思独特,问好.
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韩少君
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 00:53:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢 zhangmin 江南雨

问好。
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重庆子衣
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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 17:33:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

既有纯真的童心,又有深刻的思想。喜欢着呢~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 21:51:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

shake hands cup of wine
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PostPosted: 2009-08-12 03:20:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

意境开阔!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-12 03:46:48    Post subject: Reply with quote

没捉摸透。。。 Embarassed
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