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白马关吊庞靖侯
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PostPosted: 2009-03-22 01:25:55    Post subject: 白马关吊庞靖侯 Reply with quote

白马关吊庞靖侯

鹿头关前风休休,谁家残月冷似钩?纷纷利剑追白马,潺潺清泉化赤流。
虎哮千岗溃敌阵,凤鸣两界悲汉帱。先生枉自送身死,此处江山也姓刘。

古柏森森焚晚香,心寒眼热叹西厢。名震京师第二客,才服新野徐一郎。
孤亭只愿听清韵,雅室亦思唱楚江。忽闻鸦噪祠旁树,白雨潇潇泪两行。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-22 02:17:20    Post subject: Reply with quote

敬请方家指点!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-22 02:37:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

很好的怀古诗。“利剑”是否“利箭”之误?庞统死于箭非剑。欢迎新朋友!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-22 03:29:38    Post subject: Reply with quote

有情有境,提.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-22 17:19:45    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!“利剑”确是打错了,应为“利箭”
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