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不是祭奠的怀念
下一个偶像是野兽
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PostPosted: 2007-01-23 09:10:05    Post subject: 不是祭奠的怀念 Reply with quote

谁看见
昨日的少年

花丛中蛰伏
弯曲的清瘦的亡灵

永恒的微笑
谁看见

谁看见
那些真诚的死者

漂浮的身影
模糊的真相

镇定从容
谁看见

长安的城下
我与冬天和妓女同在
试图拯救
却不是祭奠

他们唱起忧伤的歌
所有人
继续表演
不是祭奠




以上面的文字,献给中国历代伟大的诗人。向你们致敬。
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PostPosted: 2007-01-23 18:56:51    Post subject: Reply with quote

本身是抒情的
但短句,很瘦
影响其感染力
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PostPosted: 2007-01-23 20:07:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

所有人
继续表演
不是祭奠

如刃
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