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七绝君权

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-04-06 11:46:14 Post subject: 七绝君权

七绝君权皇帝龙袍鲜血染，六亲不认为君权。黎民百姓多悲苦，犹盼贤君垂圣怜。

秋叶
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Posted: 2009-04-06 13:37:57 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝

七绝君权

皇帝龙袍鲜血染，六亲不认为君权。
黎民百姓多悲苦，但乞贤君垂圣怜。
...

庆宏兄大作频传啊，“乞”字不如“盼”好，贤君应不用子民乞，供参考。

qinghongh
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Posted: 2009-04-06 14:46:33 Post subject:

秋叶 wrote:

qinghongh wrote:

七绝

七绝君权

皇帝龙袍鲜血染，六亲不认为君权。
黎民百姓多悲苦，但乞贤君垂圣怜。
...

庆宏兄大作频传啊，“乞”字不如“盼”好，贤君应不用子民乞，供参考。

谢秋叶兄指点！改为：

皇帝龙袍鲜血染，六亲不认为君权。
黎民百姓多悲苦，犹盼贤君垂圣怜。

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