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沪上群落(上海行组诗之十四)
山城子
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 17:25:06    Post subject: 沪上群落(上海行组诗之十四) Reply with quote

沪上群落(上海行组诗之十四)
文/ 山城子

1、
他们本应高粱玉米一样地站在田野
不知为什么移栽水泥马路街区
像一些被画错的向日葵
拿着维持生存的道具
身上裹着警示车辆的显色
收拾文明后散乱成的不文明积习
没人驻足与他们亲切
寂寥的贫穷艰辛在城市的繁华里


2、
吊塔伸着长臂指向脚手架
脚手架亲密着那些黄头盔和胶底鞋
飘下来尽是皖豫的口音
年轻不年轻的心里都不再长麦子
如今改长高楼大厦
大厦高楼密集也不住着他们
他们总是盼着夜餐后趴进棚子
各自搂着个手机说话


3、
灯彩亮起媚眼的时候
街流夹进来几辆三轮子脚踏而行
拖斗子无限夸张着所载
叠起塑料瓶桶包装纸壳废旧报纸
不知道他们从哪里来到哪里去
只知道一路神采飞扬着外地话语
这一天贪了黑大概拿得不少
许多大轿车优越着心情掠过

2009-03-19于上海
【通讯:561104 贵州省平坝县红湖学校(退休教师)李德贵】
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 17:37:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

2、
吊塔伸着长臂指向脚手架
脚手架亲密着那些黄头盔和胶底鞋
飘下来尽是皖豫的口音
年轻不年轻的心里都不再长麦子
如今改长高楼大厦
大厦高楼密集也不住着他们
他们总是盼着夜餐后趴进棚子
各自搂着个手机说话

精彩的描述,动人的诗歌。你老在上海收获颇多啊。问好你。
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PostPosted: 2009-03-18 18:02:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢刘浪褒奖!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-19 15:23:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

老师这次是周游列国啊,羡慕 Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-03-19 15:26:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

也就从辽宁故乡到儿子的居住地,然后再回贵州!
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PostPosted: 2009-03-19 15:39:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

这么长时间的旅行, 盼注意休息,多保重.
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PostPosted: 2009-03-20 17:34:03    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白水至诚的关心!!
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