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sfiawong
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2009-05-05
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fābiǎoyú: 2009-05-31 04:15:31 fābiǎozhùtí: 新舊交替端午節

新粽味香比古典,那知今代有新型. 龍舟成友誼象徵,世界雲集齊比拼. 屈原立功表真情,帶來了世界和平. 人人都喜悅忘形,今代歡樂更高興. _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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半溪明月
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fābiǎoyú: 2009-05-31 05:33:22 fābiǎozhùtí:

句式很整齐，不知道算不算古体，提给白水兄看~

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sfiawong
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2009-05-05
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fābiǎoyú: 2009-06-03 23:44:40 fābiǎozhùtí:

不算,不算,古詩有古詞.怎可唱新咏? _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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sfiawong
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zhùcèshíjiān: 2009-05-05
tièzǐ: 813
láizì: US/HK
sfiawongběiměifēngwénjí

fābiǎoyú: 2009-06-12 03:24:24 fābiǎozhùtí:

半溪明月 xièdào:

句式很整齐，不知道算不算古体，提给白水兄看~

不算,不算,古詩有古詞.怎可唱新咏?

如果這也算是古體,相信半溪明月君可以寫上百篇章!
_________________
有評必回應.
Love your relatives and friends when they are near you.
我的英文詩:
http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong
http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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