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关于革命

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-03-13 16:35:55 Post subject: 关于革命

关于革命 1 女孩藏在门板后面卸去这块门板就露出了她的肚脐和小腿门板被拿去抬重伤的人或铺上四分五裂的地图女孩的留海像一缕野菜菜色的脸显得很薄她转身跑去的时候屁股露在了外面 2 一日做新郎二日上井冈忍受屈辱的女人藏在映山红下等待哥哥的第一声枪响男人们涌进长沙去为千万个饥饿的妻儿杀人放火火铳里母亲看到了金色的稻田还有驯服的羔羊天堂一样来到自家门前（待续） 2006年夏于江西莲花《共产儿童团的战斗》剧组 _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

子花
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Joined: 08 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2009-03-13 16:37:50 Post subject:

坐沙发！！

nobody
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Joined: 31 Dec 2006
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Location: Madtown
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Posted: 2009-03-13 17:51:54 Post subject:

诗鲜明丰满。至于革命。。。不确定其正义性。可能就象写的：男人们涌进长沙去为千万个饥饿的妻儿杀人放火 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

张凡修
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Joined: 05 Mar 2009
Posts: 82

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Posted: 2009-03-13 17:56:13 Post subject:

这个......玄.....

安红红
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Joined: 07 Feb 2009
Posts: 1808

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Posted: 2009-03-14 03:19:38 Post subject:

读得正有味～～来了个～～下回分解～～吊起俺的胃口～～追吧～～问好～喜欢读这样的～游刃有余～～ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

野航
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Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 547
Location: toronto
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Posted: 2009-03-14 05:44:09 Post subject:

忍受屈辱的女人藏在映山红下等待哥哥的第一声枪响 _________________ 回归自然回归心灵回归传统

杨海军
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Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Posted: 2009-03-14 13:07:33 Post subject:

独特风格的诗。喜欢。祝少君写出更多的作品。 _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Location: 中国
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Posted: 2009-03-16 14:38:57 Post subject:

好像在描述电影镜头，有意思。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

吉林阿未
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Joined: 02 Mar 2009
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Posted: 2009-03-16 19:10:20 Post subject:

问候少君，你的诗值得学习。我也写得很早了，只是没有成绩，希望你多多赐教

阿依琼裙
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Joined: 09 Apr 2007
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Posted: 2009-03-16 23:02:51 Post subject:

在许多时候，有些事是有很多意义的～～如革命～～ _________________ 踏过废墟,走来 http://blog.sina.com.cn/m/weiyurong

娇娇
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Joined: 18 Nov 2008
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Posted: 2009-03-18 14:37:58 Post subject:

意味深长！ _________________ 每段路都有蹊径，向着阳光延伸！

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